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The tall male was panting heavily as he layed on the cold forest floor.His tan skin was dark under the oak tree's that shaded out the glimmering moon.His shirt was strewn atleast three  feet away from him.His shorts were torn and dirty and covered in mud.His body was splashed with blood and dirt,and his left hand was almost fully off.He opened his eyes,they were a crimson red.Slowly looking up he could only see trees,and leave's.He bit his lip in pain as he tried to sit up.As he sat in an upright postion he suddenly got the feeling that he was being watched.Looking around he caught a glimpse up shiny amber optics patruding from some berry bushes.


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The girl watched him as she sat in the bushes.He was a stranger probably some fool who got beat up.But his wounds looked to deep and his mangaled hand could have not be done by a human.Her amber eyes scrolled from his head down to his muscular shoulder's and then to his abs,witch were six packs.She was utterly disgusted but very much attracted to his smooth muscular and tall body.She looked at his hair.It was as black as coal,it was also dirty and messy.Poor thing all torn up and left to die in the middle of the forest she thought her head tipping to one side.I should help himshe thought seeing that he had already spotted her.She stood upright and stepped out of the bushes ready to assist the injured guy.


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He watched her in amazement as she stepped out of the bushes.She was beautiful,no gorgeous,her skin was pale but hinted with a little bit of carmel color,her skin looked smooth like a baby's,her eyes shined curiously at him like two glimmering star's in the sky,and she was skinny,and tall.She wore a faded pink,blue,and white tee-shirt which was short enough to show her belly button,she also wore a farely short skirt with multi faded colored tights and some brand of flat shoe's.Her hair was a coconut brown with blonde streaks and it hung down to her shoulders.She walked towards him and he flinched as she reached out her hand.He slowly lifted his right hand trying to steady himself so he wouldn't land on his left.He grabbed her's slowly and they both looked at eachother for several minute's which seemed like forever.Then slowly she helped him up carful not to grab his mangaled left hand.She nodded to him and then slowly started to pull him into the forest in an unknown direction.He followed her cautiously limping slightly from a deep wound in his right leg.He had to try to keep from screaming each time his left hand brushed against something.Everytime it did it sent a surge of pain that could make an army man cry infront of his sargent.Finally he saw it,it was a huge log cabin with smoke billowing from a chimmeny.She led him inside and pointed to a couch.He stumbled over to it and quickly sat down.She walked into a room with a large camo colored blanket hanging in the entrance and soon returned with a medium sized box containing gauzs,alchol,and all sorts of medical stuff.She sat on the cushion next to him and took some cleansing alchol out of the box with some large white cleansing pads.She poured the alchol on a pad and gently began wiping the blood,and dirt off his wounds.He grinded his teeth everytime she put the alchol on a differnt wound.But the worst part was his hand,one touch of that alchol on his mangaled hand made him scream in pain.The girl didnt seem to mind the screams.Goddammit this hurtsthe boy thought and cringed as she gently put more alchol on it.She looked at him then took out the gauzs he let out a groan and slowly lifted his left hand.She gave him a stick and he grabbed it and put it in his mouth.


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The girl could see that he would be ready to scream as soon as she started to put the gauzs around his hand.She slowly and as gently as she could,started wrapping the gauzs around his hand.She glanced at his right hand and saw it cringe and she could hear groans and small crys of pain as she countinued to rap it.Finally she was done and his once blood and torn up hand was covered in white wrapping.She looked at his face and saw that he was panting he must be thirstyshe thought and got up walking into the kitchen and getting a freshly cold water bottle from a cooler.She came back into the living room and opened the cap for him then handed the sweating cold bottle to him.She was in satisphaction as he pressed the water bottle to his mouth and drank it all in a couple of swollows.She grabbed the gauzs again and started to cut the rest of his pants off from the knee up until she saw where the gash was in his leg.She put alchol on it and placed the gauz on it and taped it down.She was satisfied at how neatly she had bandaged his wounds then walked over to cushioned chair and sat down in it.She reached over to a wooden stand and grabbed a tv remote and switched her plasma tv on.She turned it on to mtv and started watching some jersey shore.She noticed that the guy was just stareing at her with his head down part ways.She stared back and finally started to speak "who are you?" she asked her voice seemed to echo.He stared at her for a few more moments then spoke himself "my names kageon." he said his voice sounded friendly like any other seventeen or eighteen year olds.She nodded "im skylar." she said and looked back at the tv.


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Her names skylar how prettykageon thought and noticed her voice to.It was smooth and sorta harmonic and it made him feel slightly better.He looked at the tv and was about to groan when he saw that she was watching jersey shore (which he hated) but decided since she practiclly saved his life he wouldn't complain.Suddenly feeling super tired he rested his head on the back of the couch and dozed off.Waking up several hours later,he looked over at the chair skylar had been sitting in and saw that she was gone.Looking around the room and not seeing a clock he sighed in annoyance for not having his watch.
Probably wont finish this but whatevs :P

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I really did enjoy this! lease finish it!
ok so on on technique i took off .5 points because of grammar :3
i know you will probably hate me, but i am a grammar freak :\
I REALLY LOVE IT WRITE MORE!
ok so imma write some random stuff to finish this XD

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